Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

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A_GronsakerLv14A_Gronsaker

the whole chapter was stretched out unnecessarily, lately the chapters have been like this: start with a brief mention of the previous chapter, short new info, massive description of either things happened in previous arks of the world (not relative world aspects) paraphrasing things mentioned before like how they feel or how they thought (even though it could have been done in the previous chapter it will repeat in the next) and then in the end a little bit of new story development. This is the problem with the WebNovel publishing model, it is more lucrative to stretch out and pad things out.

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MahyoLv15Mahyo

#It was done....not (fone).

Mahyo:I like the repetition though. It was fone to have a platform to launch the coming unpredictable storyline. We are not close to the end of this gargantuan adventure.

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NStarLv15NStar

At least it explain how she was able to be there at the good place at the good time, she’s a believer of Weaver, so she must have seen where fate will guide them

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Alex_Torres_0013Lv15Alex_Torres_0013

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DescentofpotentialLv15Descentofpotential

Children plural, Nephis as well, why know that's interesting.

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Blackblood_24Lv15Blackblood_24

NOOOO😭😭😱😭

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vivavergilLv15vivavergil

awesome, simply awesome. well done guilty!!!

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LoshLv15Losh

We might get to learn about the Origin of Aspects? If the Spell is a Creation of The Weaver, then the Aspects given are from The Weaver. Might explain the "Children of Weaver" Title that was given.

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Jeremy_MackeyLv14Jeremy_Mackey

this chapter just solidified a theory of mine. I won't tell the whole thing, but I will say pay attention to how much Sunny's friends... mirror the old gods/demons. and what forms they've taken during each nightmare. definitely a big clue.

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