Guiltythree
I just wanted to say that I really like your pacing. You don't drag out the story where it isn't necessary (like in this chapter) and you manage to describe important scenes with a lot of well written details, which is rare compared to other novels on this site. In conjunction with the really(!) well-written characters, this story feels somehow natural/realistic. I got similar feelings as from the Kingkiller Chronicle from Patrick Rothfuss which are my absolute favorite books.