Guiltythree
Start describing your characters better please. I still don't know what Sunless looks like except pale and black hair. Try to be a bit more detailed! My biggest notice up to now FB1, You'll hear more feedback (fb) from me when I get into more chapters. Good work.
I don't agree with her third advise completely because it depends on the particular person about whom we are talking about..because if the individual in question is intelligent and strong enough then there are far more pros than cons if he acts alone..yeah there may exist some situations where you'll need to co-operate with others but most of the time you'll do more good and gain far more if you work alone but requirements are you'll need to be intelligent and strong enough..but if individual in question is weak..not strong enough then it is better for him to stay and work with a group but then he must have some smooth tongued skills and may be sometimes some bootlicking skills if he wants to survive in this kind of environment but it also depends heavily which kind of group/party we are talking about.....