Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Slave

THAT'S A LARVA?!

That fight description was insane. Gj Author

great work 👍

looking good so far but things are a little hard to imagine...

Make mc tall

"LARVA"

Hard to understand. A little too descriptive

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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

nice chapter

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Too descriptive. Leaves little room for the imagination to go wild, and Using too much words to describe something happening really fast isn't ideal. But it's really good.

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good best one like it

what a fight, this should get Adaptation

tx

Thalaiwa

Amazing