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Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Slave

JayKai2
JayKai2Lv6JayKai2

Interesante.

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LeoStriker23
LeoStriker23Lv15LeoStriker23

THAT'S A LARVA?!

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I_O_O_I
I_O_O_ILv4I_O_O_I

That fight description was insane. Gj Author

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Religious_Guy
Religious_GuyLv14Religious_Guy

great work 👍

tortle
tortleLv3tortle

looking good so far but things are a little hard to imagine...

Abyysal_Morphling_
Abyysal_Morphling_Lv1Abyysal_Morphling_

wilythecandyman
wilythecandymanLv15wilythecandyman

Make mc tall

_Purple_Hyacinth
_Purple_HyacinthLv2_Purple_Hyacinth

"LARVA"

Jacob_Kendall
Jacob_KendallLv13Jacob_Kendall

Hard to understand. A little too descriptive

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Superbad11
Superbad11Lv1Superbad11

💥💯

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Necwtinaz
NecwtinazLv12Necwtinaz

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Sidis
SidisLv15Sidis

nice chapter

EternalEight
EternalEightLv11EternalEight

[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Your_Average_Guy
Your_Average_GuyLv1Your_Average_Guy

Too descriptive. Leaves little room for the imagination to go wild, and Using too much words to describe something happening really fast isn't ideal. But it's really good.

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Rhizanthys
RhizanthysLv12Rhizanthys

Well done..[img=recommend]

Medapati_Gowtham
Medapati_GowthamLv1Medapati_Gowtham

Yeah it is.. ..

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FTLnovaKid
FTLnovaKidLv12FTLnovaKid

👍

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Girassol_elli
Girassol_elliLv1Girassol_elli

I only learned to comment now... but what a good chapter! This world is so (terrifyingly) cool, I hope I can find the patience to finish this entire novel, and put patience into it. 🌻

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Ann_Morgan_5516
Ann_Morgan_5516Lv1Ann_Morgan_5516

Good start!

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simondicks87846
simondicks87846Lv1simondicks87846

good best one like it

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Akmalbarg47c
Akmalbarg47cLv2Akmalbarg47c

what a fight, this should get Adaptation