Muthoni_Murira
yes, I do personally enjoy reading the details of their training, so far I find the way you have written balanced enough that I don't feel overwhelmed with too much detail or over explanation.
Completely agree. A lot of novels I read don’t have a good balance because they focus too much on the cultivation in stead of the plot or vise verse. I like how it’s equal parts of both here and you know what’s going on with their training but it doesn’t overwhelm the plot shoot how they want to advance
So far, I love the way you have written this novel. The details of the way they train make me understand more about their cultivation and what they want to accomplish. It lets you show how much work goes into their training. It makes it more realistic for me, as it almost becomes real. Keep up the good work!
This box is a waste in their hands. Neither wants to do alchemy, or apparently any kind of crafting skill. If one of them were to at least do talismans they could use it to grow the materials for paper and possibly ink if they had a recipe for it that was plant based. If they were to do item refining then they could also do wood based crafting as well. Maybe they could even use it to create formation flags (if they were made of wood).