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Comments of chapter undefined of Transcending 10,000 Daos [BL]

GiaSilver
GiaSilverLv15GiaSilver

yes, I do personally enjoy reading the details of their training, so far I find the way you have written balanced enough that I don't feel overwhelmed with too much detail or over explanation.

S8_25
S8_25Lv4S8_25

Completely agree. A lot of novels I read don’t have a good balance because they focus too much on the cultivation in stead of the plot or vise verse. I like how it’s equal parts of both here and you know what’s going on with their training but it doesn’t overwhelm the plot shoot how they want to advance

Hanane_El_H
Hanane_El_HLv15Hanane_El_H

So far, I love the way you have written this novel. The details of the way they train make me understand more about their cultivation and what they want to accomplish. It lets you show how much work goes into their training. It makes it more realistic for me, as it almost becomes real. Keep up the good work!

Shishabun
ShishabunLv15Shishabun

Yes on the training details, it adds a great deal to world building which I find important.

Alsanme_Alcius
Alsanme_AlciusLv14Alsanme_Alcius

I really like how your going with the story you gave just the right amount of details.

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Hailey_Tripe
Hailey_TripeLv3Hailey_Tripe

The details on training have always been my favorite parts to read in any novel

Nyx020
Nyx020Lv14Nyx020

I really enjoy all bits of this story. The pacing and balance are great and I can't wait for more! ☺️❤️

GregLikesBooks
GregLikesBooksLv4GregLikesBooks

This box is a waste in their hands. Neither wants to do alchemy, or apparently any kind of crafting skill. If one of them were to at least do talismans they could use it to grow the materials for paper and possibly ink if they had a recipe for it that was plant based. If they were to do item refining then they could also do wood based crafting as well. Maybe they could even use it to create formation flags (if they were made of wood).

Bangtan13BL
Bangtan13BLLv14Bangtan13BL

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Minaxi_Madhwal
Minaxi_MadhwalLv4Minaxi_Madhwal

really enjoyable...

petty_jojo
petty_jojoLv14petty_jojo

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