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Honestly, the novel is very good, it has a lot of potential for growth, but there is one problem....Reading one chapter every twenty-four hours is simply killing the passion of the readers, I'm not sure what you think sir writer, but I hope you write two chapters every day, this Also because one chapter does not contain many events... And frankly, I would prefer you to increase the length of the chapter, most readers feel more comfortable when there are chapters that are a little long, and this will solve the problem of few events, in the end I hope you will excuse me in case I was rude Or you think I interfere in your affairs, I'm so sorry! But I love this work and I just wanted to express an issue that I found urgent.....Thank you for your continued writing.