Comments of chapter undefined of The God Of Primordial Chaos
The God Of Primordial Chaos
DMC_MAX
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The initial information is kinda dragged in my opinion, which could've been explained in lesser words. It consumed so much space that a reader would normally skip all those paragraphs. The information of the MC is pretty much non existent, where did the assassination attack occur? Nobody knows. Why the assassin killed him? Don't know. How did Sylta and the guy appear in the picture out of nowhere? Never told. When did the scene switched to seeming heaven or some celestial world where the piano was playing? No distinction, time skip, or separate in scenes. Lastly, hook. Where's the catch? Why should the reader flip page to the second chapter? Being reincarnated as the God isn't really catchy enough, considering there is an ocean of such books on WN. [~Aysel]
