Comments of chapter undefined of Teacher in HOTD

*Just a few things (the children's chapters bore the readers, they always prefer a time jump from childhood to the main part, it would have been better that when he reincarnates is already when he is a teacher and you only mention the important points and continue with the main part which is your title, since as I said many do not like this part that you write). * you have mistakes that make the father of the "Mc" is the father of his wife , it is confusing , among other errors. * but the main thing is better that you make a time jump , so that he starts being a teacher , it is your decision .