Alan_demonic
Fighting scenes are good, but please don't do battling scenes back to back unless it's a tournament or gym battles or some important battles cause it will become boring like just after battling his father in previous chapter, he fought both Ash and gary in this chapter and maybe in the next chapter too.
I thought the fights were good, especially the fight with Gary. Also, I didnt really get bored when the fights came back to back, but I can understand how other people can. Maybe add more dialogue or something, like peoples reactions to not just how Alan fought but how well Ash and Gary did as well or something idk. Thanks for the chapter tho, I enjoyed it.