Comments of chapter undefined of What if? Severus Snape.

Pacing isn't a problem for me at the moment, but if you want to speed things up that's cool too. The most important thing is for you to write how you want, and what you feel the story needs.

While not an issue for me, the story does seem to have slowed down a bit. Keeping the amount of stuff you would need to cover till the fight part (considering the confrontation happens after Sirius Graduates, or even in his final year). You could just as well have the main storyline continue and have the other character interactions in between when you're stuck with the main storyline.

Waiting for next chaptes.

my thoughts? POWKACHOW

Thanks for the chapter.

Really? your job is amazing. Thanks for the chapter. I loved the slice of life in every fan-fic in this case the interaction of the characters

Thanks for the great chapter! Can’t wait to read more! Good luck with your exams!

Thanks for the great chapter! Can’t wait to read more! Good luck with your exams!

thanks for te chapter

Thanks for the chapter

As long as you finish the story its fine. Its your story after all.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

take your time