Comments of chapter undefined of DC: REBORN AS ZEUS (OMNIVERSE)

Hey man, you need to improve your creativity, speed up the events a little. If you continue like this, I'm afraid the story will become boring and simple and you will have to drop it, so I hope you improve the wording of the dialogues and other problems facing the story anyway thanks for the chapter

Really liked this chap, thanks 👍🏽

When is there gonna be action it feels like the story is standing still

Lütfen zavallılara aldırış etmeyin çok fazla yetişim romanı okuyunca bu tarz sanat eserlerini idrak edemiyorlar

Nice chapter!!! Keep up the good work

استمر يا بطل 🔥🔥🔥🫡🫡🤩🤩👍👍

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Exelente Capítulo 🐼

Nice

I don't have much to comment. Early chapters were all about survival, training, fighting, war, vengeance, and discipline. now it's exploration of relationships family, governing, and science/magic technologies stuff. it seems to me you set your protagonist to a clear path and there haven't been any deviations from his stated goals. there's nothing wrong with that. if I have an attention deficit disorder then maybe the pacing would irk me.

TFTC ❤️❤️❤️

Good chapter keep it up

Love it man keep it up and if you still struggling with grammar get gammarly and if you want to impove you English I say download Duolingo

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

good chapter, thanks

thanks

Gracias por el capitulo