Comments of chapter undefined of DC: REBORN AS ZEUS (OMNIVERSE)

Try posting you work in grammarly and it will tell you all the grammar mistakes

please try

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Hum...

Gacha system? Can some1 explain this? Is it like a system shop where you can choose what you want to buy or a random lootbox system?

please use grammarly. this desperately needs it.

INtersting story so far so good Great first chapter

Belleza de capitulo !!

great chapter

Daha fazla Daha fazla muhahamahamaha.a

After reading a some serious quality reincarnation novels my expectations got a bit higher, and that's bad. I need to tone down my anticipation a lot lower this time to not just quit reading this.

why system???

from a few paragraph he looks like he will do great as a idaten

Thanks

Thanks

my brain hurts

Gracias por el capítulo hermano ❤️~ []~(￣▽￣)~*❤️

You should continue with book but writing it in third person is not a good read

You can buy grammarly

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