Papa_Smurf_2755
If this is the same Peter, I hope he won't remain that awkward teenager who struggles to communicate effectively, as that would become quite bothersome. I must admit, I am quite fond of your portrayal of Peter so far. However, I have concerns about his goal of traveling the world, as it seems disconnected from his previous life's dreams. If this is indeed the real Peter, it is more plausible that he would be influenced by his other selves and potentially become a heroic figure. Of course, it's your story and your creative choices, but I wanted to share my thoughts and point out these potential flaws based on the changes you've made. Perhaps a different approach, in the beginning, would address these concerns. So, dear author, what are your thoughts on this? Personally, I find Peter's current goals to lack coherence and make him feel out of character.