Comments of chapter undefined of White Online

I really enjoyed the journey and i am sad it came to an end. And i have to admit that the end came faster than i expected. But nonetheless a big thank you for your Hard work and this wonderful book. I wish you all the best and hopefully we can welcome you back again on a new book. :)

This was a great book and I spent probably more time than I should have up at night reading it. Thanks you author and I hope to stay safe and well!

What a journey. I have to congratulate you on writing a beautiful novel. You did something many authors fail to do. Wrote a satisfying ending. without making the novel feel longer than it should’ve been because it could of made more money. Thank you

Rushed little near the end but, Overall I enjoyed the journey

I want to ask what happened to his parents, his siblings and all other important person in his life? I mean, his mother is pregnant at the time the demons invaded and the last chapter that talked about his father is that he walked away with no destination in mind. Will his father be reunited with his mother? What happened to his siblings that is not invited to go and protect White Paradise? Did they die? If not then, where did they go? Did they go with their mother? What happened to his unborn sibling? Did it live? If yes then, what is his name and what is he doing now in the current timeline? The story still has many things that can prolong it so I think it is rushed. However you made a masterpiece and my new favorite book. Please don't take offense on my comment and questions, I simply wanted to know if there will be clarifications about them or if it will be a new book that will answer my curiosity. My comment is too long so I'll cut it here. Thank you once again for making a masterpiece.

Great story and it’s sad that it’s over, also the ending was really rushed. Are you gonna continue martial arts system now that you wrapped up this book?

Awesome!!

the end just seems so rushed.

thanks a lot for the story!! it was amazing!

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Great book, thanks for writing it. I’ sorry that it had to come to an end, but glad that it was written.

Love it

Is this the end of the book?

This was an amazing book and the journey was so fun to read I wish I could see more of the fight with demon I mean he is the strongest it should have been the best fight but that’s a small thing compared to the amazing book Thank you for the book

Thank you for the amazing book. I will definitely read it again some day.

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I couldn't have enough of the story.. Kudos to the author Thanks

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can you start writing martial arts system again now