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Cavaleiro
CavaleiroLv10Cavaleiro

Readable
ReadableLv15Readable

Will wraith be able to Take down the Orc Chieftan, or will the Orc Chieftan succeed in avenging his fallen brothers…

SwordCreator
SwordCreatorLv15SwordCreator

illusion bullet for the win 🏅

ONIISAN
ONIISANLv4ONIISAN

Thanks for the chapter

Rivalin_Drahsk
Rivalin_DrahskLv13Rivalin_Drahsk

Dont_like_to_talk
Dont_like_to_talkLv14Dont_like_to_talk

Thanks for the chapter

Cenauge
CenaugeLv14Cenauge

I've figured out the thing that keeps annoying me; author uses hype as a crutch. The constant references to how important this detail will become in the future, or how this is the pivotal point in a much larger story, etc, are a very hit or miss technique (usually miss), because it almost definitionally takes you out of the action to tell you about other stuff. It's like watching anime with a friend who is constantly saying stuff like "these three side characters come back as villains in a later arc," "this character is the MC's hidden rival," "MC eventually becomes the God of Snipers." It's like "dude, we get it, you've already seen the anime or read the manga and know the story--can we experience that too or are you just going to keep bombarding us with minor spoilers?"

Armitano
ArmitanoLv4Armitano

thanks for the chapter

Erik_Rasmussen
Erik_RasmussenLv14Erik_Rasmussen

Hey, you got someone that can destroy the outer armor of the centipede. Start running for the head or neck junction.