Comments of chapter undefined of In Kumogakure after adopting Hinata Hyuga.

I think it's good that its raiden. it fits better.

this plan is horrible. its even worse than the original. why would u want to be discovered?its unnecessary. when he succeds everything is fine. when the ninja is discovered and killed u can demand compensation. when u plan for the ninja to be discovered, u basically just ask one of ur ninja to just die. thats what a bad leader would do. and when the ninja is captured, ur f***ed. by removing the target to escape, he effectively lowered the chances of the mission succeeding. you also need a beta reader. The structure of your sentences isnt very good.

With Enel's 100% template, up to Madara's sage of the six paths arc, he should have no problems. I see no reason to be afraid of the Hōkage.

Nice but what is the point of taking Hinata is your Mc lolicon

Rayden👍.Yeyue lol👎

Amigo, sin ofender, pero si estuvieras al 100% de Enel, solo un super Kage podria detenerte

Yeaa Raiden is better, in Honkai and Genshin Raiden name is the use of Lightning element so I like it

Who tf is the golden glitter man?

gracias por el capitulo

I think yeyue supposed to be translated to yotsuki. But raiden sound nice too Ps. Ye yue = Night moon Yotsuki means night moon

Reading!

Wouldnt they just brand and kill her? Maybe brand her and destroy her womb? This plan seems barely thought out if even barely.

Interesting 🔥🔥 Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

this fic is like the opposite to another one im reading

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Nice

thx for chapter

Who is the love interest???