Crystal_Cat
Crystal_Cat:Well it's a translation I didn't really want to change it too much
this plan is horrible. its even worse than the original. why would u want to be discovered?its unnecessary. when he succeds everything is fine. when the ninja is discovered and killed u can demand compensation. when u plan for the ninja to be discovered, u basically just ask one of ur ninja to just die. thats what a bad leader would do. and when the ninja is captured, ur f***ed. by removing the target to escape, he effectively lowered the chances of the mission succeeding. you also need a beta reader. The structure of your sentences isnt very good.