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Some advice for writing a novel in general english. The most important part of writing English is knowing which tense to use (present tense, and past tense). When writing inner monologue, never use anything other than past tense. Instead of using words like safe, choose, live, create, buy, and break. Use saved, chose, lived, created, bought, and broke. This can make your writing much more bearable and improving your English at the same time. Another thing is the use of contractions, which combines a verb and glue words, which connect sentences together for them to actually make since (Ex. not, well, have, of, and had). In order for your writing to not sound so robotic and making look like it was written by an 8 year old, integrating this can help you in the long run, and'll help you rewrite grammatically incorrect sentences. Instead of using; I will, I am, had not, will not, cannot, should not, are not. Use this instead; I'll, I'm, hadn't, won't, can't, shouldn't, aren't. Now all this will likely require you to research on your own on this. Mainly because I'm a native speaker and know all this by instinct at this point, so all this could've been wrong. So just start searching from the basics and stuff that'll back up my great knowledge. I do recommend finding a program that corrects your mistakes and learn more. I mostly use google docs since that is free if money is a problem. If you aren't broke, use a program called Prowritingaid. That teaches you more about writing and helped me a ton. Make sure to combine that with the google docs add-on though, both miss minor grammar mistakes for whatever reason and it's pretty frustrating. Thankfully they both call each other out on those mistakes, so rest assured. I hope you actually read this, this was way longer than I thought, so bare with me here. Can't wait to see what you'll do with this series since I'm already a fan. Have a good day and take care of yourself.