Comments of chapter undefined of Kiss Me Sweetly, Detective Yang!

this rewritten chapter is preety good the way it's more descriptive and seems to have a consistent flow with each scene the writing did gave a visual picture of the scene and seems to give more clear view to characters and it seems a great way to start a fantasy genre story looking forward to more rewritten chap

Okay, I literally loved this chapter. That was a grand opening 👍👍👍

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