Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon: The Medieval Era

Maybe you can make it less damaging in a different way. Like make it so that the noble families or the academy staff set up a separate section of eggs they intentionally leave to be eaten by the wild ghost Pokémon. While keeping a separate group they intend to keep in a more hidden and defendable place. This way the mc could steal from the sacrificial group and actually rob the wild Pokémon instead of the humans. This way you don’t have to make the adults look weak or stupid in some unrealistic way. You could have the Academy staff either catch him or simply watch and ignore him. Plus they might even respect,be impressed or approve of his bravery in stealing from wild Pokémon. This would also allow him to freely use his new ghost type without being afraid of getting arrested or having it taken away. You don’t even have to change your plan, just the reactions of the adults. I think this would be a more realistic way for the event to unfold.

I love the story so far! I would like for the MC to get a ghastly and can you make it so the third evolution has not been found?

in my opinion its fine that the mc steals because he doesn`t have enough money, he is a civilian and if he tries to work like a tutor someon would trie to recruit him and if he refuses he is probably going to get hunted

instead of stealing you can ask the one guy if he can buy a egg for $1million as a green grade is 2million and it has low chance for most he would probably accept but seince he has the Grade Detection Eyes egg lottery's are perfect for him :P

quick question how would you categories eevee one evolution or non 🤔 cause if its non i would choose all eevees. also would it be good to say that Its not that popular because it dose not provide any benefits until after its evolution. so people tend to not choose it. I don't know maybe you could use my idea in the future or a new book.

what type of ghost

Go on a mission, find a Dragonite egg :)

author i support your idea 100%.

Keep it up ....

isn't it better to work for a family than get kicked out of the campus for stealong

good story so far if you think stealing is food for the progress of story, the go for it. i just wanna say, please make it balance. from the 1st chapter till now, the MC never get "distruption" in his daily life. maybe in this stealing chap you can mix some sort of nerve wreking adventure. i dont know. some sort of facing ultimate guardian ghost pokemon or something. so the MC remembered that he can lose his life. yeah, thats what i think

Fair enough. But maybe you could have had him risk his life in the wild instead of an academy built facility. Stealing from wild Pokémon would be dangerous and bold. But since he is stealing from the academy he is technically robbing the royal family and any other noble family that supports it.