Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: The teacher system

Let him explore the ninja world but change the excuse from coma to something else. Heck, just saying that the mc is going on a secret S-rank mission is a better excuse than the whole coma thing as it sounds too suspicious honestly. Also, this is a suggestion but you can also add a travelling companion to go with the mc such as one of his students or maybe someone he meets on the trip itself and nicely develop a relationship between them. Ohhh, maybe send Kurenai with him, that would be a perfect opportunity for their relationship to develop 🤔

i feel that the comma is unnecesary it's going to create unnecesary drama even if It is a solution to him leaving temari without training as It was promised, another solution could be a rank S mission of long duration investigating akatsuki (like jiraya) or an S rank gone wrong (of course such mission didn't exist and was just a ploy from tsunade and sanada) and when he comes back he can say that after the failiure of His mission he took the chance to see the world to have more to teach or smth like that, do what you Belive is best it's your story afterall. Hope you rest well and keep Up the good work P.D.: make your mind Up regarding tsunade, either an absolute no or get them together webnovel readers usually don't like being blueballed

The Adult Sasuke thing and traveling are fine. It's just that he has a 'Teaching System'. Which means that for him to get stronger, then he needs to teach people. That's the bread and butter of the story. Now it's fine if he didn't have that system orr if the world was peaceful. Then he could take all the time he wants. But there will literally be a World War in two years. And he knows that. So him leaving on a journey without taking his students with him is not only illogical, it's downright stupid and practically suicidal. You've already written yourself into this with the system so the only logical conclusion and my suggestion is to take Sasuke, Sakura, and Karin with him. It would feel pretty bad if you leave any of them behind since it makes it seem like he 'abandoned' them. And they're kids and are really attached to him so they'd prob feel pretty bummed out and feel abandoned if he leaves any of them out. Just treat it as a training of sorts to expand their horizons. And it's a perfect time for them to bond since the MC has been distant this whole time. It's a nice time for good character moments. Maybe explore Sasuke's emotions to make him grow as a person. Or tackle Karin's past trauma from her old village. While maybe having Sakura be more confident and act as more of a leader that keeps the team together. Temari would be a perfect excuse to take a look at different villages divide and social stigma. Have her act as an outsider while slowly accepting the fact that they're not so different after all. It basically writes itself is all I'm saying.

The comma should be changed if possible.

Thank you everyone for the advice. So the point I get untio now is 1. Change the coma thing ( It won't be that hard, so I will be rewriting this part ) 2. Time traveling Boruto is not a big problem ( Maybe I'll rewrite some parts so it will be a bit more natural ) 3. Add more romance 4. Bring some disciples with him If you guys really think it needs a rewrite please don't be polite to tell me. In fact, the whole Tsunade act is a rewrite >_<, the original one I make is just following the cannon which the only change is Sanada training Naruto. I like writing this story, and I like to explore every possibility here. ^_^

Define his romantic relationship better don't keep on hanging

as for me it would be better if he travels not alone, but with one of the students.

Tsunade x Sanada please!! 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

let him go to the suna and take a temari to travel the world, and in konoha no danzo is worried about a maple tree that is sleeping

I also feel coma is unnecessary Also.he can go over and pick up temari as his travel companion. Thank you for your hard work

it was great before the Chunin arc in my opinion.... suddenly something was lost and i don't know what it was and the novel became less anticipated...

Please change the comma thing as it sounds unbelievable, it would be better if you had been sent on an S-rank mission

Could you ship the Mc with anko? Almost all naruto fanfics use kurenai

why not travel along with his apprentices like jiraiya and naruto. and also stop making things more complicated. the more you complicate things the easier to make mistakes so chill ok. rewrite the things you need to rewrite and improve. you know danzo is a coward. he wont make a move that he will sure to win. like in shippuden he only made a move when tsunade is in coma to get the hokage throne.

why you give a "comma" as an excuse tho? i want to know.. cause it doesnt make any sense.. how comma is better than just traveling or sectet s rank or more mission..

He should bring Sakura with him for the travel.

I would like if sakura could accompany sanada in his journey and get stronger with him.

Fight and befriend momoshiki

You should probably change the coma thing. Like another commenter said, you can judt put him on an S rank mission and no one will probably question it. He is still a ninja of Konoha, it wouldn't be that unusual

where is konohamaru gang generation, how about create sect or Academy for universal teaching system' for all people willing to study, accept donation from all country avalaible for scholarship or private tutor maybe tuition fee