Comments of chapter undefined of Yu-Gi-Oh: Billy Nightmare Adventures
Yu-Gi-Oh: Billy Nightmare Adventures
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You need 2 improve writing quality,. It appears you Don't know how to separate 3rd person, first person, and writing narrative which is all important and will cripple any work.
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