KnowingAutumn
Please read whole message before forming opinion on comment Author please be careful about how long you make this "part" of the story To short you don't get the character development you seem to be going for To long the readers get angry over the constant cycle of "unpleasantness" Personal opinion try to have each chapter of this arc move towards something doesn't have to be big steps but this chapter feels like a change in direction rather than a move forward from the previous chapter which is why I thought it might be "helpful criticism" to give my opinion