KnowingAutumn
Author, how do you feel about me making a russian translation of your fanfic without asking your permission?
Stockholm syndrome... The author crippled the main character in terms of character. It looks too shabby, I wouldn't even be surprised if he forgets his family in this development. Although it is possible that this is the influence of armor on consciousness, trying to rebuild the hero's thinking on loyalty only to Atofe.
You know what the problem is in âgrowing strongâ kind of story ?! The character always faces someone stronger than himself, no matter how strong he gets, he always fight someone stronger Which doesnât show the charecters groth nicely. At that moment itâs just changing The title of the character and nothing more . A good way to avoid this is showing the character fighting someone wayyy weaker than him self showing how he Was once like this weak guy but now he can just look at them and they will die .
Mc is a muscle-brain idiot who thinks with his hormones and sword. he has no self-respect whatsoever and like a child with low EQ, he is rarely considerate of others. that's a fact no one can make me think otherwise that's just how his character is written. from the author's previous stories I anticipated this outcome. I am not belittling the story it is second best mushoko tensei story but that is only because it has no real competition. update stability is the good writing style is better and just character design is meh. what is the main problem with this ff is the interaction of the characters it always emphasizes mc's low eq and horniness to highlight his age which is something the author wants to focus on. he admitted it himself