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Comments of chapter undefined of Mushoku Tensei: Magic Swordsman

Tenwoc
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Author, how do you feel about me making a russian translation of your fanfic without asking your permission?

KnowingAutumn
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Go ahead, I don't mind if it's a translation instead of copy-pasting on to another English website.

Melusinee
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Trixuny_Andrew
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It is kind of gross how little he cares he was made a slave and even the talk about love and respect. He is acting like an easy girl in a harem novel.

Exargna
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Stockholm syndrome... The author crippled the main character in terms of character. It looks too shabby, I wouldn't even be surprised if he forgets his family in this development. Although it is possible that this is the influence of armor on consciousness, trying to rebuild the hero's thinking on loyalty only to Atofe.

DragonsRulez
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People are so upset about this. Like he can not do anything about it except use her to his benefit

NoobNoveler
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mhmmm it's only me this novel should have anime i mean original so sucks for me -_-. if the original the story like this maybe will good. btw thanks for the chapter :D nice author-chan

welcome_7920a
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Rudy: Believer of The Sword Cult

Ryviria
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Stockholm

Badtime
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Ayo Mc better parade Atolfe like a Pet Slave after he beats her cus I don't like how mc acting mad sus

RaijinGod
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Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁👍

Jiggz10k
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Nah this is too good we need a extra chapter ASAP!!!

RavenClock
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You know what the problem is in ‘growing strong’ kind of story ?! The character always faces someone stronger than himself, no matter how strong he gets, he always fight someone stronger Which doesn’t show the charecters groth nicely. At that moment it’s just changing The title of the character and nothing more . A good way to avoid this is showing the character fighting someone wayyy weaker than him self showing how he Was once like this weak guy but now he can just look at them and they will die .

Pill_God
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Thanks for the chapter I don't like this but others have said that too ig

SSRB
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Thanks for the chapter

Darksil
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Thanks

VashuRajput269
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thanks for the chapter 🤠

kokimon
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Thanks for the chapter

bingbongchingchong
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I like this chapter. I wish I had more stones

Times_Avatar
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Keep Going And Thank You For The Chapter

whitethief274
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Mc is a muscle-brain idiot who thinks with his hormones and sword. he has no self-respect whatsoever and like a child with low EQ, he is rarely considerate of others. that's a fact no one can make me think otherwise that's just how his character is written. from the author's previous stories I anticipated this outcome. I am not belittling the story it is second best mushoko tensei story but that is only because it has no real competition. update stability is the good writing style is better and just character design is meh. what is the main problem with this ff is the interaction of the characters it always emphasizes mc's low eq and horniness to highlight his age which is something the author wants to focus on. he admitted it himself