Comments of chapter undefined of Mushoku Tensei: Magic Swordsman
Mushoku Tensei: Magic Swordsman
KnowingAutumn
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Yeah, this a great change from Canon. He at least gets to see his family before the teleportation event one last time, and get to know his sisters a bit. I still think you should have him teleport to the demon continent. Since, it became a big part of who he is. You should also switch up who gets teleported with whom. Norn could be the one who gets teleported to the demon continent and gets found by the green demon guy. Aisha could get teleported and found by the dragon guy or the guy with the flying castle. The adults can get teleported randomly. Zenith becomes a hostage in a far away land instead of an amnesiac. The maid and Paul get teleported together and their relationship develops. Which could be an interesting dynamic to explore. Like he's trying to find his wife, while also developing a relationship with the maid, which leads him to feel guilty. I don't really have any suggestions for Rudeus and Eris, but having what happens to their families change can be also quite interesting.
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