webnovel
avatar

Comments of chapter undefined of The Bringer of Light

Author liked the comment.

Theroxis
TheroxisLv13Theroxis

You might want to get a editor or beta for this fic. There's so much that could be improved upon.

Bolt_1
Bolt_1AuthorBolt_1

I appreciate your suggestion, but I'm not interested in that. I'll just improve as I write, I believe that, as I get more experienced, my writing/narrative will get better.

Jarod_Lane_8547
Jarod_Lane_8547Lv13Jarod_Lane_8547

Is he a transmigrator I’m so confused?

Ginkgo_biloba
Ginkgo_bilobaLv13Ginkgo_biloba

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Renzairo
RenzairoLv12Renzairo

thanks for the chapter