Bolt_1
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You might want to get a editor or beta for this fic. There's so much that could be improved upon.
I appreciate your suggestion, but I'm not interested in that. I'll just improve as I write, I believe that, as I get more experienced, my writing/narrative will get better.
Is he a transmigrator I’m so confused?
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
thanks for the chapter