Loved the chapter! Can you release more of the 100 chapters i like the character more than the one in your teen wolf ff. (The teen wolf one has a interesting setting its just. . .the mc of that story is a little robotic at times, its usually when he isn’t interacting with cara though)
my only complaint here is the quality of grammar in this chapter... a strong repetition of "but" and "then", especially in the middle of the fight which was kind of weird, but for someone's first story this is very good size .