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Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon Reincarnation System

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David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

Main thing that kept the story interesting is the MC. How he reacts to situations and his general personality growth. Things I dislike is how over the top things became once he died as a jumpluff and how many fking times he had to restart his progress. In general for the future, keep your fics a bit more grounded with set rules that only the MC could possibly break. Powers should be scaled to continental or touching global through passives as a maximum. Anything beyond that will suffer the higher cultivation trope/realm since at that point you'll be forced to keep making harder enemies to face since the pacing went too fast. And also I'm serious about the losing his powers aspect. So many stories have lost a lot of readers when a MC has to go through that despicable trope. The only other thing I can criticize is the romantic interest. She came out of left field and dominated the MCs thoughts for wayyy too long and including the two ROBs is a bit annoying. Either the ompimontent beings are at the start or they should never be allowed to influence the plot in such a blatant way. I never liked gods playing GM

FryKnight
FryKnightAuthorFryKnight

Ight, ty for d notes

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Susan_Tandog
Susan_TandogLv1Susan_Tandog

whew this has been a rollercoaster nevertheless a good read

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dsWinter
dsWinterLv13dsWinter

This is definitely one of the best stories I read, the fact that from beginning to end you keep surprising me it is definitely the best point of it. Other aspect that I love was the overall world building and how well you made the characters, none felt forced, witch made me love some and hate others, but that only shows how well written they felt.

Cats4life
Cats4lifeLv4Cats4life

I cant believe I got here with all the complaning I did, but it was nice

ze_ze_1793
ze_ze_1793Lv1ze_ze_1793

4/5

Michael_Qwenton
Michael_QwentonLv1Michael_Qwenton

Jesus this took, what, a year. Still thank for writing this.