Comments of chapter undefined of Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!
The story goes too fast. The initial idea was very good but the execution of the story was bad. I think his system that destroyed the story, he had gained enough power to protect himself. But with the system becomes more unattractive because it loses the tension for the next story. What does the story continue if sytem pThe story goes too fast. The initial idea was very good but the execution of the story was bad. I think his system that destroyed the story, he had gained enough power to protect himself. But with the system becomes more unattractive because it loses the tension for the next story. For what the story continues if sytem has handled all his problems? And the interaction between the characters is very flat, there are no emotions that I feel in the character. Like a robot
