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Comments of chapter undefined of Yandere Therapy

Cypher_Riser
Cypher_RiserLv12Cypher_Riser

I think it was a great idea to get the readers opinion on this, thanks for the chap

AsuraSaiyan
AsuraSaiyanLv13AsuraSaiyan

I would like it very much for there to be lemons. I think it should or could be in the order he met the girls so Alice first, Jasmin second and so on. I'd say the development of when and how the lemons happen should happen naturally since Cane is a smooth and calm person. For Alice you could add a smelling/sniffing kink where they do the deed while he is sweating and his pheromones are on full blast thus increasing arousal for Alice and Wolfy of course. For Jasmine, since she is trying to be his Queen and him the concubine I'd say to have Cane be sadistic and dominate her but not so she goes full on masochistic or she could but only be submissive to him. I would say about the rest but that would make my comment too long plus I'm sure as the Author of this masterpiece you'll know what to do once the time comes. Thank you for your time and I am anticipating the next chapter.

Flhunter35
Flhunter35Lv15Flhunter35

Okay we got to have some nice Lemon and I think Alice has to be first. Maybe she has a smell fetish like we've seen from hoe she took his cloths from his apartment, the lemon doesn't have to be soon but let it just be eased into the story.

Magicbeer
MagicbeerLv15Magicbeer

I say the first time should be a important event. The others could be casual depending on the situation.

Seth_Biggs_1321
Seth_Biggs_1321Lv4Seth_Biggs_1321

(using my own character nicknames bc I can't remember their names) Ms. Blood would turn it into a contest or game. Wolf Girl would be rough and chaotic, but still trying to show her dominance over the other girls by pleasing him. She hulk would either get too into the pleasure and hurt him, get flooded with emotion and become semi submissive, or a mix of both. nun would do everything she could to please him and still get overwhelmed and the tsun would be a tsundere until she reached "nirvana" then would just melt into it.

Ian_White
Ian_WhiteLv1Ian_White

It should be very obsessive. Each girl should have a kink suited to them. Wolfy would probably have a smell/taste kink. Jasmine(blood girl?) would have a biting kink. His bodyguard would have a torture kink. The preacher girl would have a vanilla kink. You get what I am saying yeah? I don’t mean to say they should have those specific ones, just something that makes sense. It would probably lead to each yandere getting very jealous until a few snu snu with each. On a side note. Can you post on Scribblehub or Royal road and the like? Webnovel is super finicky on mobile, you would probably get boosted on the other sites easier as well.

Irakiel_Rael
Irakiel_RaelLv1Irakiel_Rael

Lemons please