I question Breston; I suspect he is a mole for the monsters. Or that this is going to turn into something other than what they calculated about the monsters all together.
I'm hooked at how this chapter sounded like the script of one of those war action movies to me. Also, I’m loving this new side of Maxi I’ve been waiting for a long time, I don’t want it to disappear.
And it’s just the beginning. I’m so freaking excited for whatever comes next.
This chapter is so unbelievably vivid, I felt like I was there ,like the whole battle is happening in front of me. I thoroughly enjoyed it, bravo author. This was well written 👏👏👏👏