I'm hooked at how this chapter sounded like the script of one of those war action movies to me. Also, I’m loving this new side of Maxi I’ve been waiting for a long time, I don’t want it to disappear.
And it’s just the beginning. I’m so freaking excited for whatever comes next.
This chapter is so unbelievably vivid, I felt like I was there ,like the whole battle is happening in front of me. I thoroughly enjoyed it, bravo author. This was well written 👏👏👏👏