Comments of chapter undefined of Picking Up Beautiful Girls In The Post-Apocalyptic World!

It was fine I guess. I am no pro but if your objective was to describe a dance scene then it was a miss. However if it was to progress the story while mixing romance and one thing you like then it was a hit. The chapter didn't feel forced. Anyway thx for the chapter.

to be honest, i don't know what MC seeing in Her. Clearly she was Crazy Psycho in progress. she clearly had prideful ego problem,since she is so angry to Han just because he didn't sign the contract under her. that means she didn't get bonus from contract. and she didn't had legitimate reason to angry, since Han want information that clearly she didn't have regarding third party in the contract, even vice president company told him to go directly to company president.

This chapter was incredibly smooth

thanks for the chapter

It was good in describing the seamlessness of the couple...perfect movie scene

Thanks for the chapter

If I find someone better at explaining a superb dancing experience I will personally let you know.