Comments of chapter undefined of Date a Live: Inverse Spirit of Paradox
Date a Live: Inverse Spirit of Paradox
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You know, I just feel empty like that one time with Flewkey since it is happening all over again but it is innevitable this time. I do understand why you would want to do it like that author-san but it feels forced. Excluding the fact that you have given the loli away to the beta male who is likely considered a puppet at this point, Shidou never really have any development which is what you and I have talked about before. He is there and that is just it, so giving him the spirit feels wrong like the plot demands it so there is no way out of that. Maybe eliminating him from the get go would have been better, there are a lot more things to work on of course but it would have generally make the story more interesting in a lot of ways with many paths to follow. Well that should all be it since I don't want to type an essay. My enthusiasm for the Yoshino pairing is probably the only thing that has been binding what passion I have left. A petty reason really but it is what it is. I wish you can find a good path for the story's future author-san. I might check out the Bleach x Danmachi story later though, that crossover is a rare one.
