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Comments of chapter undefined of New God of the forge

Shota_Prince
Shota_PrinceLv13Shota_Prince

Isn't she still a virgin in this story?

Lust_Incarnated
Lust_IncarnatedLv3Lust_Incarnated

Being virgin is almost practically impossible for Greek gods except for a select few.

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Omegalumder87aplha
Omegalumder87aplhaLv4Omegalumder87aplha

I think I like how you wrote this chapter. it sound clear to me. also thanks for the chapter .

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Mastersun
MastersunLv1Mastersun

author do what you think is necessary, because you will not please everyone, and this is your story.

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Tyrant1103
Tyrant1103Lv5Tyrant1103

It's like marrying a p0rnstar (although, why ANYONE would do so I couldn't fathom). Would you watch all the things they've starred in? Knowing that none of it is you, that some of those videos could have been made while you were dating? Would you subject yourself to that?If so, write the prologue!

zangeras999
zangeras999Lv5zangeras999

It would be better if he married Athena.

Slayer76
Slayer76Lv4Slayer76

We don’t need a prologue, we know her mythos

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Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv5Lordmoonlight

I honestly don't have a problem with this chapter just want some more of MC n her and when will this ares thing will be done

Miki_Marlo75
Miki_Marlo75Lv4Miki_Marlo75

I honestly think it's fine as it is now if you had chosen the other way I don't think it would fit

PhoenixNT
PhoenixNTLv10PhoenixNT

Sim, Finalmente deixou claro que ela é uma Puta Suja. E Eu nunca gostei dela, Mas pelomenos você foi sincero nessa capítulo, e já deixou claro a verdade. Bom capitulo...

Shadyninja
ShadyninjaLv14Shadyninja

Maybe Persephone wasn't the person she should get advice from.

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Tired_Regressor
Tired_RegressorLv3Tired_Regressor

I like how you really wrote about Aphrodite's character growth and realization about her love. I think you don't have to do the prologue, honestly if you did do that, some people wouldn't like how the main heroine is essentially a prostitute who would sleep with the highest bidder (the one who gives her the best gifts).

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DarthFalcon
DarthFalconLv1DarthFalcon

I don't want to interfere with the author, but he could have chosen a better goddess.

Charlotte_Mage
Charlotte_MageLv13Charlotte_Mage

Honesrly i think you wrote this rather masterfully, it completly convays a good point and will give aphroditi a great character development

Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv14Aye_itz_cloudz

Thxs for the chap

Killer46
Killer46Lv3Killer46

Daoistvcubrn
DaoistvcubrnLv14Daoistvcubrn

patr@n?

A_Sleepless_dream
A_Sleepless_dreamLv13A_Sleepless_dream

Thanks for the chapter!!’

dragon_among_men
dragon_among_menLv13dragon_among_men

this is a very good chapter.

Demon_Lord_Panda
Demon_Lord_PandaLv15Demon_Lord_Panda

BeTtA_HiDe_Ya_KiDs
BeTtA_HiDe_Ya_KiDsLv4BeTtA_HiDe_Ya_KiDs

Thanks for the chapter!!!!