Slusher
short story with a great potential, a soul was put when writting, the readers can see the strugles but that life. things comes and go. everything must end. try to write about more deep content. change the story fix a few characters, and crescent a few more. u are in the right path. keep up the good work. also. i think amiya is already done with this story. u should have written from their beginner like how they met. how they evolved their relationship. if u do that. the next story is gonna be great too.
I really loved this book, nice writing style and I finished it on one go, the last chapter was a happy ending but it brought me to happy tears I wouldn't mind a chapter or 2 from amiya's perspective and a closing on her story but I understand if not as the ending is a bit vague and makes me wonder if she had a happy ever after and falls in love with someone else or if she always loves the main character and never dates again. reason is I broke the trust of someone I loved years ago and the hurt I caused everytime I've had a chance for happiness with a new person, I never can commit because I love my ex but also feel like I may do something again and have doubts and never commit and wonder how amiya handles it
I vote for Minami and Kazuya. For amiya.? I think if Kazuya didn't break with her, kazuya will always have a gray cloud in his mind about amiya, and someday, it'll be big bang for their relationship. It's a good story, and help me thinking more about 'What is good relationship and why we need that'. Thank you very much. And hope you can upload Minami x Kazuya as soon as possible