GaZe_Zero
I have to be honest with you, the only problem I can see, like mayor problem right now, is only the souls merging kinda weird thing. besides that, everything else is pretty much fine. If you feel something is wrong, u can just complement it with other things. you don't need to do something fancy. Just stick to simple drafts, and from there, let it flow
take your time the beauty of being an Arthur if there is an infinite nebula of possibilities if you want to rewrite and start all over do it if you want to take your time and rewrite it do it you're the one that holds the title author just remember to take your time and think about it. here's a good luck picture
Just remember it’s YOUR story, so tell it how YOU want to. We as readers have the privilege of reading the story you chose to tell, and we are very thankful for that. But it is your story so play around with it until you’re happy. And I don’t know if this is comforting or not, but, no matter what you do we will be here.