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Comments of chapter undefined of The Supreme Satanic System

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DaoistorA7EW
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you also changed the name of his city for the third time. why don't you actually edit like you claim you do? at this rate I am gunna comment on every single mistake and I'll charge you for proofreading and make everyone happy.

DaoistorA7EW
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you have called it Cantoon City, Cartoon City, and some other name a couple times when referring to the city he became the lord of. im not confused. you did the same thing with the gang he captured and turned into the blue lagoon unit when mixing vanishment and banishment up multiple times for several chapters. your poor proof reading makes me struggle with enjoying the story because of how awfully edited all your chapters are.

The_handsome_fatty:U r funny lol. I'm kind of lost here. It's different places. If there is any confusion in any way, please feel free to ask.