okay now. let's address the editing. if Clara is in the ward she can't have a driver in a vehicle drive faster, she's already there. which also means she doesn't need his coat because the medics would have already taken her for treatment. The FL should be unconscious. The last chapter said (poorly) that she was fighting (against) consciousness. The synopsis said the bride dies FL is in a coma. Are we looking at a straightforward temporary soul switch? Each imagination wondered the bliss of the other?