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In Naruto with Inventory cheat

0_0Tang_Sileima33

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DragonWright
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PUT UR SELF IN THE STORY AND IMAGINE THE CONVERSATION AND TAKE THE STORY AS IT IS REAL AND BE MORE DESCRIPTIVE OF EVERYTHING

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7436754
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bro I know there is a caps lock but chill dude

DragonWright:DONT JUST WRITE SUMMARY BE MORE INFORMATIVE AND QUESTION THE ACTION AND MAKE DIFFERENT CHARCTER TAKE NEGATIVE ACTION AGAINST THE MC AND DONT GO ALL HAPPY INTO IT THE NARUTO WORLD IS A BRUTAL WORLD IF KAKSHI KNEW THAT THE MC HAVE THAT MUCH MONEY THE HOKAGE WOULD HAVE BEEN ALREADY INFORMED AND DANZO WOULD HAVE KIDNAPPED THE MC FROM HIS MONEY OR ASKED THE MONEY AND THEY TOURUTER AND INVESTIGATE THE ORIGIN OF THE MONEY
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TijolinBr
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imagine the situations and think how you and the people close to you would react, and it is also experience with that the story will get better and better.

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FIN99
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Work on there expression you can write what they feel when they're talking or caps lock when shouting and try this when they stuttered "w-why tho...." -example and when they're surprised and asking "WHAT!?!? " if shouting and "what!?!?! " if not Thats how you give them a 3D feeling

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Gustavo_Mendes
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Beta mc?

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Damiency
DamiencyLv1Damiency

thanks for this chapter

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7436754
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watashiwacloud
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Thanks for the chapter

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smasher2018
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Thanks for the chapter.

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