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Comments of chapter undefined of In Naruto with Inventory cheat

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TijolinBr
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imagine the situations and think how you and the people close to you would react, and it is also experience with that the story will get better and better.

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DragonWright
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PUT UR SELF IN THE STORY AND IMAGINE THE CONVERSATION AND TAKE THE STORY AS IT IS REAL AND BE MORE DESCRIPTIVE OF EVERYTHING

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FIN99
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Work on there expression you can write what they feel when they're talking or caps lock when shouting and try this when they stuttered "w-why tho...." -example and when they're surprised and asking "WHAT!?!? " if shouting and "what!?!?! " if not Thats how you give them a 3D feeling

Gustavo_Mendes
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Beta mc?

Damiency
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thanks for this chapter

watashiwacloud
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Thanks for the chapter

smasher2018
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Thanks for the chapter.