Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal Fate Series: The Solar King's Fate

Came here from your other book. Very attention grabbing first chapter. Off to another good start.

That was a real system bug for you to have to start over but I'm grateful for the extra chapters because of it. 😅

I'm glad you got it sorted. I'd hate for you to have to redo it again.

I see you restarted. I hope everything worked out this time.

I hope you don't mind me corrrecting the first word on your thoughts at no. 1: "Their" should be "They" or "They're" and omit "are"

New reader of your novel here, Author San. I also have another one of your book in my library. I love this mix of mysticism, mythology and even systems that you have ingeniously combined with one another that I got myself all eyes out at the first glimpse of the synopsis but turned out more captivating as seen just in the first chapter. I hope the journey reading along with the story I will find it to be more astounding as long as it gets around and more anticipating as more elements add up in it.