John_Doever
it's all good author. you had to shift gears so that's understandable. however, must I say? The death you gave Mollusk was very satisfactory. It wasn't to quick, it wasn't downplayed. Mollusk knew he lost, accepted it, and Thanatos (cant remember his actual name I'm sorry.) respected the will to survive and complimented him in his unique way. While I hesitate to say I feel a brothership between the two, it definitely feels like a brothership