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Comments of chapter undefined of Super Necromancer System

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SLAY3R_1108
SLAY3R_1108Lv15SLAY3R_1108

Love the character development!!

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GarbledThief_7
GarbledThief_7Lv14GarbledThief_7

And I definitely think these chapters are important and helpful for worldbuilding/character development. That attention to detail helps make this such a great story. Oh

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Ollie_Hanlon_clark
Ollie_Hanlon_clarkLv14Ollie_Hanlon_clark

no I love them it gives us other perspectives on the world eldritch and deeper insight I to ur characters

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panda_kings
panda_kingsLv15panda_kings

i dont mind the conversation lets us understand the people around him better and what kinda situation is going on

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LeoStriker23
LeoStriker23Lv15LeoStriker23

This is awesome the Side Characters needs chapters like these so they can feel just as real as the MC does.

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DepthDweller
DepthDwellerLv15DepthDweller

I love the conversation personally. I am all for having character development and expansion that we can actually see.

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GarbledThief_7
GarbledThief_7Lv14GarbledThief_7

Tbh I think we tied Hip

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Hip_Hoppy
Hip_HoppyLv14Hip_Hoppy

I have a nice little streak going

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Grunty_Lover
Grunty_LoverLv15Grunty_Lover

I love these chapters, keep them in please!! I just hope you include Aldrich as well, say opening up to the legion about his parents and how he became who he is

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Halfsweat
HalfsweatLv14Halfsweat

I enjoy hearing character opinions it helps make them more fleshed out instead of being drones of Aldrich thanks for the chapter

LadyAlex
LadyAlexLv14LadyAlex

I like these chapters!! I was actually wondering how an idealist like Eileen would take seeing the harsher side of Aldrich, so I think this chapter definitely improved the story!! its cool seeing how much depth each character has, and how their different morals and backgrounds shape their various relationships with both Aldrich and the other members of the legion 😁

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Rivel_Emerald
Rivel_EmeraldLv15Rivel_Emerald

I liked it. Good development all in the span of a single chapter. At the end of the day though its all a balancing act. I've read some stories where anyone not the mc basically didn't exist. And I have read stories where the author drags out advancing the plot for too long, focusing 10+ chapters in a row on random women simping for the mc that are then immediatly forgotten about. This however felt like the right amount of time spent on development, and it was spent on actual relevant characters to plot/legion. Once more, I say great writting!

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SansTheComic
SansTheComicLv4SansTheComic

Thank you for the chapter!

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Everything_Forever
Everything_ForeverLv13Everything_Forever

Loved this,thanks for the chap!

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Justin_Hope
Justin_HopeLv13Justin_Hope

we need more husbandos tho

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Max1mumCr4zyGam3s
Max1mumCr4zyGam3sLv4Max1mumCr4zyGam3s

Oh, no. The side characters talking to each other is gud 4 development. :)

Arthias
ArthiasLv7Arthias

I think these sorts of conversations are important to the story. You're right, they're not that exciting. Nothing wrong with that at all. Not everything has to be a flashy, exciting moment. Times like these help us to understand who the characters really are as individuals and how they are feeling about events. This is great. And thanks for the chapter.

sir_kral
sir_kralLv14sir_kral

2D characters only support to make the OP MC that much less believable. when you flesh out these side characters it makes the world 3D and more believable and makes me as a reader more invested. it's a story with characters, not a power trip. keep up the good work.

Nicholas_Gagliardo
Nicholas_GagliardoLv15Nicholas_Gagliardo

It's good for character development, shows that they aren't mindless slaves and it helps show that the world they are in has all types of people as well as showing all the different types of people Aldrich is fighting for.

165th
165thLv3165th

there's no black or white in this world everything is in shades of grey