mamun_220
Thanks for Chapter. Writing got realy Better good job on that. maybe Try instead "......." "..........." ....... "........" "........." "........." ........... "........" in Conversations if someone Interrups someone try it Like this. "i forbid you-" "Men are Talking silence wife" maybe throw some Emotions in the Talk in * ....* that mc is Scared they wont help or even Forbid the Ritual a Thougt from his Parents how Proud they are about him . some Human interaction here and there to flesh the characters that have Meaning and come back the Story. I write this so you can think about it yourself and not as a Guideline ,it would be fine if you found a Way to Incorporate your Idea with - Speech- i just mentioned it becase it was offputting they way you implementet it. i Get the Pureblood thing and the idea behind it thanks ( But then you could also say that the house elfs/wards told the Parents already that he can do Wandless Magic and they used it to Brag how much a Genius the Twins are .) Keep up the Good work