Comments of chapter undefined of Apocalypse Cheater

there's a lot of boring chapters lately

boring

i will comment on how I've read this far...chapters need better editing. there are quite a few moments in each chapter this far that have left me confused, or are a mash up of 2 different sentences, missing key words, etc. so that def needs to be worked on.secondly, the constant repeating of the same thing (solely for word count perhaps? ). once or twice is acceptable, after that, you're just kicking a dead dog while it's down. the point has come across the 2nd time max, any more after that is redundant.3rdly, I like the story so far. it is quite interesting how when they "log in" they're literally transported to this other realm. pretty neat. I'm also a fan of how MC is gungho about putting his plan into action and staying on task for it...just wish he'd give a bit more time with his mom.as far as the mom goes... I'll leave that alone.😅😂🤣

Thanks for chapters brother

thanks for the chapter

Good chapter