GoldFinger
This has been a very good novel, are you going to make one where the MC gets one of the system soul gummies?
Whooo! One of my top 1% best ffs to grace this app! Your best work yet and im a bit sad that it endedđĽšReading and immeraing myself with the story, watching the trials and tribulations the MC has went through as well as the Happiest times Jay went through. Made me emotional man. Looking forward to your next ff and beyond. My favourite author
This is why you shouldn't have time travel messes in your novels or at least avoid including a scene from the future in a present chapter. None of this matched what you already had as the canonical events. He had to be guilt tripped by Offee into giving Ahsoka a clone in the timeloop event, not picking her up because his mom convinced him to. At no point before this chapter has he aged himself forward and his daughter as of last chapter was only 6, hardly older enough to appear as tall as him or have a full conversation with her mother. Frankly this chapter was bad as far as an 'ending' goes all because you couldn't remember your own story events or apparently be bothered to go back and at least reread them to be sure. So disappointed...
After all this time this journey ends so another can begin. It was an amazing ride! I loved the story and it has accompanied me to my daily life for a while now. (how long has it been really? Can't remember) Anyway thank you for writing this amazing story. This last chapter had me moved in tears. I can't wait for your next stories.
Ooo Wee that was a long wild ride. I feel like i went back to my childhood where i had to wait to watch the weekly episodes of Naruto on tv, simple and fun times. I'm really glad that i read this from the start where i got to follow along the journey, eagerly waiting for the next chapter after reading it in the morning during work. It really has became my habit that slipped into my daily routine, one that would make me uneasy when you didn't post btw đ. Now that the end is here it's making me nervous, sad and happy at the same time but atleast the upcoming works of yours is putting me at ease. Can't think of anything else to say atm so, I love you.