Comments of chapter undefined of The girl who lived (Harry Potter fanfiction)

interesting, so far it starts the same as the original, only one change that would be the sister (protagonist), besides it would be better that the paragraph that is incomplete, this together, as it takes away the immersion of reading xD. - another question (who will be the main she character's partner -and when I publish 10 chapters I'll post my reviews, although the fact that it's yuri is already a big plus (since there aren't many yuri-themed harry potter stories).

Merci pour le chapitre

thanks for the chapter

also, would you be so kind as to put the link to your "wattpad" profile? . since nothing appears.

sad u droped this

Waiting for a new chapter 😿~☆