Comments of chapter undefined of Pokémon : An Unexpected Journey

Thanks for the chapter

Question I can’t see if anybody comments or comment myself on your novel but I don’t have that problem with any other story I can only see comments if I go to end of chapter and click comments do you know why

the chapter have gotten shorter

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

AGAINST A GOLIATH PART 2 ( A WARTORTLE EMERGES) ! While we caught up with our Ash, Brock and Misty and Yellow in Birth Island region Sulphur Island facilities beforehand, which had our Cythia pov and learned that the lessons were well by the previous action by Bulbasaur. As our Ash Ketchum sent out Squirtle on the field against Garchomp using ice beam , but Garchomp pulled an unexpected impressive fire technique that Squirtle remembered a past experience ( flashback) as Squirtle was abandoned by trainer Derek ( cause he lost against a Growlithe ) and Chansey was there for him though but didn't want another trainer till Ash Ketchum arrived immediately meeting with the Squirtle Squad. Unexpectedly Squirtle evolved in to Wartortle as Garchomp fire techniques met with the new waterfall attack with explosive results in the Birth Island region facilities. As Pokémon battle continues for Ash vs Cynthia in against the overwhelming Garchomp. We'll see how it goes next time for Ash, Brock, Misty and Yellow in Birth Island region Sulphur Island facilities as Garchomp 12vs 1 keeps heating up in the Sulphur Island area. The Journey continues Catch ya later Cheers! P.S. There's one thing that I already have speculating here , Cynthia's point of view on the rotation of new Pokémon in Journey for Johto, and Orange island regions ,which Cynthia point has merit but isn't doable for Ash Ketchum , cause if he doesn't know that has meet certain Pokémon in certain regions of course, otherwise Ash ( Austin) Ketchum Pokémon journey stops at Kanto( right off the bat)( sort of contradiction with the nature of the tv show) so Austin can't not do the rotation with going to new places, Pokémon, people unknown for traveling with the poke crew in the Pokémon world .

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Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter ! And it's Wartortle and not Wortortle !

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