Comments of chapter undefined of Alexander Benjamin Tennyson (Ben 10 Fanfic)

The Creator

Good chapter Pay attention to the perspective from which you are writing. Don't switch from I to he and back

"Limiting his powers" that turned out to be sarcasm.

TBH I loved the entire chapter, UNTIL you got to the stupid old man and how they 'treated' him. Literally not needed whatsoever and ruined a majority of my will to continue reading...

You could have done a hole lot more better the you did in this chapter, to cliche and to lame

Soooooo Cliche But still a good chapter

The old man was not so wise.... However, author, interesting way to "nerf" the MC. You make it even look like a "fortune" for him.... When it is not.

why ask for appearance if you just going to be ben himself lowkey I never like fanfics where people take over already existing characters body ima just give this a shot but still why

if we forget that it's a cartoon, it's basically a world like marvel... another thing, I don't like that they put cartoons to represent the characters like in anime fanfics, put a cosplayer and that's it

Holy mackaronie the wishes are stupid as f… why didnt you wisch for 1)Advanced growth rate from medaka box 2) absoulte intelect 3) immortality

finally a Ben 10 fanfic

there is something i just don't understand, whydo peaople use anything other then "" for the dialogue when their writing? isn't that the official dialogue thingimajig? like in this story the author decided to use -- for dialogue but, just why? all the good stories use "" so whY WOULD ANYONE USE ANYTHING ELSE!? P.S. those are my personal opinions and that doesn't mean that the story is bad if they don't use "" it just feels like a grammatical error and is painful to read for me.

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

Exp

well that was a great twist